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Don't you hate it when you told everyone you were rewriting my first five chapters, and then you read all the way up to Chapter Sixteen before you found a chapter that didn't need a complete rewrite? What the fuck were you thinking? Anyway, we're still on for Friday. We're just on for fifteen rewrites and five heavy edits, instead of the five rewrites we thought we were on for.

P.S. Everyone who liked Chapter Eleven, including me, needs a punch in the face.


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Jul. 4th, 2012 10:01 pm (UTC)
Yay! Although I won't have interwebz this weekend so I'll be behind on reading 'em. (I must tell you this because I'm sure you NOTICE when people don't comment *snerk*)

I don't remember when I started reading, but it was far enough in that going back and reading from the beginning seemed a daunting task. Maybe when I read the rewrites I'll get hooked!
Jul. 4th, 2012 11:10 pm (UTC)
I'll admit that whenever I'm not on a regular updating schedule, I decide when to post the next entry based on who's already commented. Not because I demand accolades, or am a special snowflake, but because I started this thing to have some fun with TS2 and share it with people. It's just no fun talking to a vacuum; thankfully I get lots of attention and support from y'all. I'm very fond of my regulars, and I make sure they/you know it by responding to anything they/you say.

The rewrites are much more user-friendly. Less walls of text, more dialogue, and many more jokes. Here's hoping they snag you.
Jul. 5th, 2012 12:14 am (UTC)
I hear ya! You put so much effort into your storytelling it deserves mucho comments. It's nice that you reply to everyone too.
Jul. 5th, 2012 09:49 pm (UTC)
I thought about saying "I thought about not replying to this, but I think the best jokes are the ones that you don't have to explain" but I think I already made that joke in a reply. So instead I made this confusing one.
Jul. 5th, 2012 04:32 am (UTC)
Count with me =)
Jul. 5th, 2012 11:30 am (UTC)
Sure! What are we counting?
Jul. 5th, 2012 02:33 pm (UTC)
We can count the bodies! I don't think you ever did that.
Jul. 5th, 2012 09:41 pm (UTC)
Ooh... that way lies only madness.
Jul. 5th, 2012 10:03 pm (UTC)
Only now I decided to google what I wrote to discover that I used the wrong preposition... it should be "count on me".
I wonder, will I ever learn this complicated language some day?
I'm going to count the bodies in the revamped version!! I'll post the results in my comment in the end of each chapter! I'll make pretty graphics!
Jul. 5th, 2012 11:19 pm (UTC)
It's only complicated because it's bad. And you're doing fine, especially considering how bad it is.

Now that sounds like an interesting idea! Except the first few updates are sorely lacking in body count.
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